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momotastic ([identity profile] momotastic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sophie_448 2009-07-06 09:44 pm (UTC)

Just a wee drive-by comment while I'm not even finished with this part but slighty heart-broken :(

Jensen swallows hard. “Goodbye, Jared,” he saysnd then he gathers up his things and walks out of Jared’s life.

I think you meant says and then?

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